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"The Worst Part of All"

Posted: Thu Apr 28, 2005 4:49 pm
by 4X541N7
"The Worst Part of All"
By:4X541N7

Pretend, for a second...
That the world is beautiful...
That blue skies are perfect...
And we are beyond the child...

Then open you fucking eyes...
See the wreckage you've throw about...
Tangle through the waste & crushed glass...
See your own reflection...

Pretend that your glassjaw won't break...
Hold it like a dying child...
In you hands...
Waiting for the end...

This is you...
A breathing waste of my time...
Though all will be forgotten...
Which is the worst part of all...

Posted: Thu Apr 28, 2005 5:02 pm
by junkie christ
glassjaws are cool.
nice usage.
hehe.
like it.

Posted: Thu Apr 28, 2005 10:46 pm
by Aerick Ravenheart
(APPLAUSE) Bravo, very well said. I enjoyed this one immensely.

Posted: Fri Apr 29, 2005 7:06 am
by 4X541N7
Thanx kids...I glad you enjoyed it...I'm sure some wouldn't...

Posted: Fri Apr 29, 2005 10:38 am
by kissmeblack
Way to go, Trev. ;)

Posted: Sun May 01, 2005 1:01 pm
by Coor
Thanx kids...I glad you enjoyed it...I'm sure some wouldn't...


Oh, don't throw a pity party at one tiny little opinion dearie...It's just not your style...I dug it...However...it just doesn't scream that "I hate you oh so much, " that the others do...