"The Worst Part of All"

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"The Worst Part of All"

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"The Worst Part of All"
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Pretend, for a second...
That the world is beautiful...
That blue skies are perfect...
And we are beyond the child...

Then open you fucking eyes...
See the wreckage you've throw about...
Tangle through the waste & crushed glass...
See your own reflection...

Pretend that your glassjaw won't break...
Hold it like a dying child...
In you hands...
Waiting for the end...

This is you...
A breathing waste of my time...
Though all will be forgotten...
Which is the worst part of all...
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glassjaws are cool.
nice usage.
hehe.
like it.
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(APPLAUSE) Bravo, very well said. I enjoyed this one immensely.
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Thanx kids...I glad you enjoyed it...I'm sure some wouldn't...
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Way to go, Trev. ;)
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Post by Coor »

Thanx kids...I glad you enjoyed it...I'm sure some wouldn't...


Oh, don't throw a pity party at one tiny little opinion dearie...It's just not your style...I dug it...However...it just doesn't scream that "I hate you oh so much, " that the others do...
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