"Good-Bye"

4X541N7 · Post by **4X541N7** » Thu Mar 31, 2005 8:13 pm

"Good-Bye"
By:4X541N7

Good-bye...
My dear...
There is nothing...
I'll ever fear...

In the end...
It's so calming...
Just pulling us down...

I can't hear...
Your words...
Denied by the sound...

And I said...
Hey, lil' angel...
Where does your faith belong...
We don't have to love each other...
Simple get along...
And you said...
Hey, lil' devil...
I don't see your point-of-veiw...
I simply want to self-destruct...
And blame it all on you...
And I said...

Good-bye...
To fear...
The end...
Is finally here...

Breathing...
The last words...
That I'll ever need...

Biting...
Down on...
The hand that feeds...

And I said...
Hey, lil' angel...
Where does your faith belong...
We don't have to love each other...
Simple get along...
And you said...
Hey, lil' devil...
I don't see your point-of-veiw...
I simply want to self-destruct...
And blame it all on you...
And I said...

You do it all to yourself...
And blame it all on me...
Heaven can see you...
And they aren't very pleased...

And they said...
Hey, lil' girl...
Where does your faith belong...
You don't have to be perfect...
Simply, follow along...
And you said...
Hey, lil' angels...
I don't see your point-of-veiw...
I simply want to self-destruct...
And blame it all on you...
And I said...

The Stormstress · Post by **The Stormstress** » Fri Apr 01, 2005 6:06 pm

Well woven poetic circle ... lyrical even ... & nteresting 2 c a softer touch from u ...

4X541N7 · Post by **4X541N7** » Fri Apr 01, 2005 6:41 pm

Thanx Storme...Believe it or not...I'm very multi-faceted...Honestly, though...I see this as being one of the most degrading things I've ever written...But...That's just my interpritation...

Coor · Post by **Coor** » Fri Apr 01, 2005 7:42 pm

Harsh. Then again...good-bye's are sometimes under harsher circmstances

I think it's absolutly fabulous though...

The Stormstress · Post by **The Stormstress** » Sat Apr 02, 2005 12:24 am

O' cours u r multi-faceted ... It'z just not a facet that I'v seen u show often here ... that'z all ...

Roseofthorns · Post by **Roseofthorns** » Sat Apr 02, 2005 1:18 pm

Nice, I enjoyed reading this one.

Mother Mo · Post by **Mother Mo** » Sat Apr 02, 2005 2:21 pm

I liked it alot. Wonderful rythm. If you haven't already, set it to music.

4X541N7 · Post by **4X541N7** » Mon Apr 04, 2005 9:54 pm

Thanx Mo...I already have the intro written on guitar...I hope to get off my ass & finish it within a week...We'll see...