"Passenger"

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"Passenger"

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"Passenger"
By: AXSaint


Sunshine bleeding, thouroughly
Stretching wounds, pouring sympathy
Seranaded with apollogies
Suffer, kiss, & bury me

I feel like a passenger
I feel like a passenger

I'm a dark shade analogy
Just a dim epiphany
Sometime bleeding gasoline
Everytime it's just so comforting

I am just a passenger
I am just a passenger

Taking my hand
Pulling my face to the ground

This spiral I swim
Is the mortal coil, drags me down

I am just a passenger
I am just a passenger

No more wasting synergy
Lusting after apathy
Climbing to the release
Suffer, kiss, & bury me

Killing off the kissing lover
I am just another passenger

I am just a passenger
I am just a passenger
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Post by sapphirerose »

Out of the ones that I've seen.... this is my favorite of yours.
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Huh....I thought you where pist at me...*shrug*...Thanx...I'm glad that you liked it...I'm writing the music to it soon...I need a sample of some things before I can throw it together though...Give me a call sometime...
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I like it. I'm not sure how I feel about it, but it' still good stuff. However, most of your's is anyways.
"It was inappropiate and definatly hott..."
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Not pissed
no worries.
:-)
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OK...I was wondering...That's why I haven't called you...Winsley told me a few things that kinda alluded to the fact that you where...*shrug*...I was just wondering if you & your man where ok?...& if your number's the same...I may give you a call in a few days...
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