A Little More Than Left Behind

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sapphirerose
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A Little More Than Left Behind

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i thought it was going to be easier
than this
and yet I lay awake counting minutes and hours
sickened with the truth that leaves me sore.

I went for a drive down by the lake
and I saw that old tree again
Only you would know what this means
Only you would know what this means

you promised the world to me
and it felt like it was mine for awhile
seems like centuries have passed
since we closed the door.

Walking away from you
was the hardest thing
And after all this time
I want you to know
how much it hurts.

I went for a drive down by the lake
and I saw that old tree again
Only you would know what this means
Only you would know what this means

I want you to know
I just want you to know
how much it hurts.
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Post by 4X541N7 »

Hey Beth,

Not bad...not bad at all.
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nice
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