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and I blink

Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2004 4:41 pm
by hodan24
I lay in my tortured self pitty. feeling every grain of hate the world has dumped on me. and I blink. Malic renderd soul laying on the floor. and I blink. Tears of blood flowing over what has already been done. and I blink. Anger towards love for loves pain already gone long ago. and I blink. Detatched I have become, of true pain and memory, denying my truth I have lost love. and I blink. Silly all that pain I charish.

Posted: Thu Jun 24, 2004 4:43 am
by Snap Dragon
...a little on the depressing side.... :-( :-x

Posted: Fri Jun 25, 2004 2:29 pm
by hodan24
when your life leaves you and sends you away you start to feel hollow inside. like part of your very soul has been left laying in the dark grass of lifes park. to find that pain and face it is to purge it from what soul is left and to make it whole agin.

Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2004 11:35 pm
by Illearia
I thought it was very moving...kudos to you.