and I blink

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hodan24
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and I blink

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I lay in my tortured self pitty. feeling every grain of hate the world has dumped on me. and I blink. Malic renderd soul laying on the floor. and I blink. Tears of blood flowing over what has already been done. and I blink. Anger towards love for loves pain already gone long ago. and I blink. Detatched I have become, of true pain and memory, denying my truth I have lost love. and I blink. Silly all that pain I charish.
you can ask me anything! and i just might do it?!?
Snap Dragon
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Post by Snap Dragon »

...a little on the depressing side.... :-( :-x
Life is a Soap Opera... and you are the star...
hodan24
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Post by hodan24 »

when your life leaves you and sends you away you start to feel hollow inside. like part of your very soul has been left laying in the dark grass of lifes park. to find that pain and face it is to purge it from what soul is left and to make it whole agin.
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Post by Illearia »

I thought it was very moving...kudos to you.
And when a gorilla has got you by the nipples.....your listening.
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