Falls, Pretenses

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Battles lost and battle cries
Painful even to these wicked eyes
Stand up, own up
It was your choice
To defend those you thought had no voice

You'll get what you deserve unless you desert

My rights were no gift from you
Our rights need no defense
You have nothing to go by
Except false pretense
....you have to be trusted by the people that you lie to, so that, when they turn their backs on you, you'll get the chance to put the knife in....
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WOW! that is really nice work!
“That proves you are unusual, returned the Scarecrow; and I am convinced the only people worthy of consideration in this world are the unusual ones. For the common folks are like the leaves of a tree, and live and die unnoticed.â€
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Is that your honest opinion or are you only being funny?
....you have to be trusted by the people that you lie to, so that, when they turn their backs on you, you'll get the chance to put the knife in....
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Logic wrote:Is that your honest opinion or are you only being funny?



Actually I am being funny. I think its a total pile of shit and find it hilarious that for a second there you thought you had done something good. :rofl:
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Good. Now we know you're no one to judge art. There are some who would say it's a work of pure genious and what you've just said is disgusting and embarassing on many levels.

I didn't think that you actually liked it and really don't care. You'll burn just like the rest.

Go laugh cluelessly to your favorite Simpsons and South Park episodes.
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Logic wrote:Good. Now we know you're no one to judge art. There are some who would say it's a work of pure genious and what you've just said is disgusting and embarassing on many levels.

I didn't think that you actually liked it and really don't care. You'll burn just like the rest.

Go laugh cluelessly to your favorite Simpsons and South Park episodes.


umm.....number one) You started the "who likes south park?" thread, not I.

umm....number two) "You'll burn just like the rest is real close to a personal attack and is not allowed on this board, Joe.
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scarecrow wrote:"I think its a total pile of shit...."

Roughly the same juxtaposed since it is just my opinion and belief.
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So he sings the blues
For you
He may get happy later
And he cries,
For comfort
Some thing to surround him
And when he sings,If you believe him
Of how every one he ever knew woul leave him
And how he's falling
Falling
He has lost his soul
To you
Call him a fallen angel
Stormy weather
Forever
Every friend a stranger
And when he sings,If you believe him
Of how every one he ever knew would leave him
Its pathetic, really...
Lost little boy
In a hurricane of love and pain
Lost in his world
Of daisy chains, and children's games
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You sound a lot like the radio.
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Whatever suits
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No not in my room.

Refrain from personal attack period, implied or blunt. This is univeral. But for the love of all the muses do not bring a personal vendetta to the storyteller forum.

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