If You Only Knew

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If You Only Knew

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If You Only Knew.
How all my days seemed filled with dream of you,
How sometimes in the silent night
Your eyes see thru me with their soft light,
How much I hear your voice when others speak,
How you amongst other forms I seek -
Love more real than such dreams were true.
If You Only Knew.

Could You Guess?
How you alone make all my hapiness,
How I am more than willing, for your sake,
To stand alone, give all and nothing take,
And never to think of you bound while I am free.
Always free, until death, to love you silently,
Could You Guess?

Could You Learn?
How when you doubt my truth I sadly yearn
To tell you all, to stand in brief space
Unaltered, soul to soul, face to face.
To crown you my king, until life should end,
My lover and also my truest friend,
Would you love me as fondly in return?
Could You Learn?
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Post by junkie christ »

i like it
much better than the last
keep up the good work
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Post by jinn »

ummm pretty sure i read this in a poetry book... r u cheating???
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