"Hearts of Autumn"

4X541N7 · Post by **4X541N7** » Thu Jul 14, 2005 11:27 am

"Hearts of Autumn"
By: 4X541N7

I never saw the empty rain...
Gaze into the darkness...
Goodnight, goodnight...
If God would ever listen...I'd confess...

But October's gonna come...
November's my new enemy...
Stiffle down, choke it down...
Simply, I'm waiting to be buried...

The angel's eyes of October...
Ended in the sweet November...
Please don't let me see Autumn...
I don't have patience to remember...
Feasting on dead leaves...
Hearts of Autumn...Tasting dust...
Heaven for the sinner...
Angel's eyes for the rest of us...

Suicidal...Numb...I suppose...
Smoking my lungs, like dead leaves...
Bite from the tears...Goodnight, goodnight...
Bitter chill...To sever strings...

Beg for an empty hole...
I'm lost...Never knew the sinner...
Only the angel...quickly labeled...
The pills...Did they keep you centered...

The angel's eyes of October...
Ended in the sweet November...
Please don't let me see Autumn...
I don't have patience to remember...
Feasting on dead leaves...
Hearts of Autumn...Tasting dust...
Heaven for the sinner...
Angel's eyes for the rest of us...

Sever the strings from the hearts of Autumn...
Cut the remorse...For the things I never did...
Sever the strings from the hearts of Autumn...
Left behind...Left behind...Left behind...Left behind...

The angel's eyes of October...
Ended in the sweet November...
Please don't let me see Autumn...
I don't have patience to remember...
Feasting on dead leaves...
Hearts of Autumn...Tasting dust...
Heaven for the sinner...
Angel's eyes for the rest of us...

Coor · Post by **Coor** » Thu Jul 14, 2005 6:56 pm

Wow...That was outfuckingstanding...It's very differant than the usual...but still killer...

4X541N7 · Post by **4X541N7** » Fri Jul 15, 2005 4:45 pm

Thanx...I'm still waiting for someone to misinterpret this...You might know what it's about...Glad you liked it...

Coor · Post by **Coor** » Sat Jul 16, 2005 1:33 am

There were a few lines that made me think...heaven for the sinner...Pills keeping you centered...

TiredUnhappy · Post by **TiredUnhappy** » Sat Jul 16, 2005 8:57 am

4X541N7 wrote:Thanx...I'm still waiting for someone to misinterpret this...You might know what it's about...Glad you liked it...

probably wrong entirely, but when I read it, I just thought of your brother.

4X541N7 · Post by **4X541N7** » Sat Jul 16, 2005 11:58 am

TiredUnhappy wrote:
4X541N7 wrote:Thanx...I'm still waiting for someone to misinterpret this...You might know what it's about...Glad you liked it...

probably wrong entirely, but when I read it, I just thought of your brother.

Actually...Totally correct...

I've just been thinking about him alot lately...

jinx · Post by **jinx** » Sat Jul 16, 2005 12:32 pm

*hug*
it's very good, darling...

TiredUnhappy · Post by **TiredUnhappy** » Sat Jul 16, 2005 2:03 pm

4X541N7 wrote:
TiredUnhappy wrote:
4X541N7 wrote:Thanx...I'm still waiting for someone to misinterpret this...You might know what it's about...Glad you liked it...

probably wrong entirely, but when I read it, I just thought of your brother.

Actually...Totally correct...

I've just been thinking about him alot lately...

Well, I knew he was born Oct 3rd, which was my original due date (freaky freaky)...and then we were together when he died ...and so...yeah. But then I figured it could have meant anything..just assumed him. kind of odd that you figured everyone would be getting it wrong and out of everyone, I knew immediately. :twisted:

4X541N7 · Post by **4X541N7** » Sat Jul 16, 2005 2:21 pm

TiredUnhappy wrote:
4X541N7 wrote:
TiredUnhappy wrote:
4X541N7 wrote:Thanx...I'm still waiting for someone to misinterpret this...You might know what it's about...Glad you liked it...

probably wrong entirely, but when I read it, I just thought of your brother.

Actually...Totally correct...

I've just been thinking about him alot lately...

Well, I knew he was born Oct 3rd, which was my original due date (freaky freaky)...and then we were together when he died ...and so...yeah. But then I figured it could have meant anything..just assumed him. kind of odd that you figured everyone would be getting it wrong and out of everyone, I knew immediately.

How is it odd that you knew immediately...You of all people should know...

TiredUnhappy · Post by **TiredUnhappy** » Sat Jul 16, 2005 5:21 pm

4X541N7 wrote:How is it odd that you knew immediately...You of all people should know...

I guess you have a point, and atleast now you know that I did pay attention. Although, at the risk of sounding like a bitch, I don't think you ever knew my eye color. Maybe I'm wrong, who knows. The poem was nice, although distressing. You really are not your brother, and you aren't going to end up like him..unless you want to.