"Sunlight/Monoxide"

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"Sunlight/Monoxide"

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"Sunlight/Monoxide"
By: 4X541N7


Alive...Or breathing...
Or nothing to lose...
Wishing...That someone...
Could see this point-of-veiw...

Forgeting...To breathe...
But not holding my breath...
This...is a fixation...
I'll never regret...

And I'm staring...
Blind-eyed...
And asphixiated...
I think I've found Heaven...
Or something related...

Creatures...Worth dying...
I'm turning away...
Given...A reason...
A reason to stay...

Speechless...They wonder....
What it is, I've found...
Heaven...Sweet Heaven...
And I'm breaking down...

And I'm staring...
Blind-eyed...
And asphixiated...
I think I've found Heaven...
Or something related...

You take my breath away...
My Monoxide girl...
And blind me, with sunlight...
I'm dead to the world...

And I'm staring...
Blind-eyed...
And asphixiated...
I think I've found Heaven...
Or something related...
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Wicked....that fucking rocked! :twisted:
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Clever. Yes. Clever... a twist on that old phrase: "You take my breath away". And... is it a GOOD thing? Well, its a gas...


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Yes...It's a VERY good thing...:)
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