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Post your bad goth poems here
Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2006 1:30 am
by Hardcoregirl
Save us the pain of reading it...
slit your wrists
Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2006 1:41 am
by Coor
Heh...
Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2006 1:51 am
by Celestial Dung
eh, if people want to post "bad" work here let them. I would rather have literature have questionable quality then no literature at all.
heck I'll show ya.
BLIND
Double heart bleed
It comes
Dumbs
Chuck and chive away
my sweetness has gone away
when I last saw you you were smiling
and wishing for another
I left you because you
were unsentimental
and untruthful
and miserable
and I came back
to you because
you were
you.
Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 4:44 am
by footprintzinthesand
Celestial Dung wrote:eh, if people want to post "bad" work here let them. I would rather have literature have questionable quality then no literature at all.
heck I'll show ya.
BLIND
Double heart bleed
It comes
Dumbs
Chuck and chive away
my sweetness has gone away
when I last saw you you were smiling
and wishing for another
I left you because you
were unsentimental
and untruthful
and miserable
and I came back
to you because
you were
you.
That's really not all that bad.... I've seen A LOT worse...