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"Disillusioned"

Posted: Fri May 27, 2005 10:58 am
by 4X541N7
"Disillusioned"
By: 4X541N7

Last night I saw Jesus...
He said..."It's not your time, yet..."
"Fuck...I didn't even know I was dying"...I retorted..
His responces was simply..."Surprise"...
In a very Jack Nickleson-sort-of-way...
Then...As I stared at his California-tanned skin...
And his Top-40-Rock hair...I said...
Wait...I thought you wheren't even real...
He said..."I'm not...I'm simply your subconscience...You sick fuck"
I could only reply with..."Why the hell, am I dreaming about you, of all things?"
"Because, you wouldn't care that you where dying, if this where a wet dream..."...He said...
"Oh...Make Sense..."
And then I woke up...Nude...Dissolute...& Disillusioned...

Posted: Fri May 27, 2005 11:59 am
by Coor
Amusing...but then again...you come up with the weirdest most random shit...just curious was this written prior or your normal writing style?

Posted: Fri May 27, 2005 1:26 pm
by 4X541N7
I wrote this today, actually...I don't limit myself to a 'style'..Well...I try not to, anyways...

Posted: Fri May 27, 2005 10:04 pm
by Coor
Well I presumed you were at work...and by style I meant your usual way that you write...not your style of poetry...

Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 9:49 am
by TiredUnhappy
The image of Jesus somehow became...Carl, from Aqua Teens...

oh god make it stop!

Posted: Mon May 30, 2005 8:26 am
by 4X541N7
No...Jesus, in my dream at least, looked like Chad Kroger...From Nickleback...You know...Blonde curly hair...Cali-tan...Little Blonde goatee...The whole 9...Though...It may have been funnier if it had been Carl...Now that I think about it...

Posted: Mon May 30, 2005 12:14 pm
by Coor
No it's funnier with Chad Kroger...singing that song that he wrote about his dad never being there... :twisted:

Posted: Mon May 30, 2005 6:43 pm
by TiredUnhappy
4X541N7 wrote:No...Jesus, in my dream at least, looked like Chad Kroger...From Nickleback...You know...Blonde curly hair...Cali-tan...Little Blonde goatee...The whole 9...Though...It may have been funnier if it had been Carl...Now that I think about it...


The Episode called "The Clowning", where Carl gets that wig, and almost gets laid...that's what I imagined.

or something http://www.80stees.com/images/products/Aqua-Teen-Carl-unicorn-t-sh.jpg
like this