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Postby cyan darkknight » Sun Jul 18, 2004 6:37 pm

8-)

Hello everyone its great to be here, the greetings is cool,
I appreciate! Later
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Here's a poem!

Postby cyan darkknight » Mon Jul 19, 2004 9:15 am

Teardrop's Sky

She is there when I feel depressed
always with a sense of irony.
When I can't go on in this life she crys
I always feel better.
To know she takes all of the sadness
and rains it upon the worlds head.
Such a sight to behold, from theater pane
and great sleep she induces in bed.
I loose myself in her misery
find myself staring as her tears fall.
Nothing in this life is more wonderful
than to see her sky fall.

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Postby Lost Traveler » Mon Jul 19, 2004 10:46 am

hey
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Postby Mother Mo » Mon Jul 19, 2004 4:53 pm

Salutations! :D
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Postby Codeine Coma » Mon Jul 19, 2004 7:03 pm

Ch33rs! Sorry don't do the penpals thing to well. Your poetry was nice though. :-) Keep up the good work!
Yes, I have wished you were dead. You are just another face in the crowd, someone who brings me suffering, someone I truely hate.
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Postby Bone » Mon Jul 19, 2004 8:04 pm

Welcome to the Asylum!
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Postby cyan darkknight » Mon Jul 19, 2004 11:37 pm

Thanks guys and gals, its cool to be apart of this seems people don't take gothic too well, haha, but anyway feel free to write anything even if its not poetry, I will post poems periodicly for everyone's viewing pleasure. Codeine Coma, Magus is a nice touch on your signature. And glad you like the poem there will be more posted soon.... Thanks for the greetings Bone, Mother Mo, and Lost Traveler. And a big hello too you all!
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another poem!

Postby cyan darkknight » Wed Jul 21, 2004 4:47 am

This Urns 4 Me

I rose from the bed, sheets falling like dirt from surfacing zombie,
don't bother with the light, darkness guides me on my way.
Always burdened with urine at twilight,
release this torment, upon this day.
Smiling faces remind me how shitty my life is
or are they hiding, plotting to become snarls.
To be alone, friends and enemys, are the same
nothings pretty and everything's dead, my eye's no longer sparkle.
Is this a dream, that I cannot wake, nightmare's reality that will not cease
I feel I'm the only one that gets this way, my hate's requiem.
I scream night upon night to no avail, I felt the needles, the razors
percise touch
why did I never have the chance to become one of them?
Taste this blood from life beating down, do you smell the copper,
it drips from nose's tip, forming my souls mirror.
Eat the flesh, she taste's good, I can smell her musk from her thighs
screams fill the room, pulling hair, ripping my back as I give it to her
My beautiful liar, shall I touch your face, wipe your tear,
I would give myself but you will recieve nothing.
This void I wrap in pretty ribbon, called it my heart once,
malleable it may be, maybe mend it into something.
Just want to rise from this, to the sky, like ashes in the wind
leave this world to its destruction, my incenerated end.
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Postby The Stormstress » Fri Jul 23, 2004 6:32 am

Grrreetingz! :twisted:
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Hey!

Postby cyan darkknight » Fri Jul 23, 2004 7:29 am

Hello Stormstress, good to hear from you!
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